Wednesday 13 May 2020

My writing learning.


 

Sorry that my drawing looks bad. Anyway here is my work :> :)

2 comments:

  1. Tēnā koe e Dayna,

    Tau kē
    Fantastic

    Dayna, I must say that you've got great artistic skills, quite talented.

    Things I enjoyed;
    1. Your drawing
    2. The adjectives you used to describe your character's personal characteristics

    Things to look again at;
    1. Describe what the character look's like

    Ngā Manaakitanga,

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  2. Kia ora Dayna,

    Keep up the drawing. I hope you enjoy it.
    I thought of connecting you to other learners who are drawing too. Here are some blog links. You could think about commenting on their blogs and linking back to your blog.
    Bill's blog
    Charlie's blog

    Mrs Krausse

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