Kia ora Dayna I really liked your movie that you made about circuits. I learnt that you can make circuits online. Maybe you could find a quiet place to make your movie. Mā te wā Mrs Torrie
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Dayna,
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you described your learning.
Maybe you could talk louder.
Ma te wa
Ella
Kia ora Dayna
ReplyDeleteI really liked your movie that you made about circuits.
I learnt that you can make circuits online.
Maybe you could find a quiet place to make your movie.
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie
hi Dayna maybe you can make the video shorter
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