Tēnā koe mō āu mahi pānui i whakairi ki tāu rangitaki. Thank you for sharing your mahi pānui on your blog.
Ko ēnei ngā mea e rata ana ki awau; 1. Āu pikitia, tau kē 2. Tō rerenga e pā ana ki a 'Harry' me te horoi ki rō kauranga, i parahau koe i tāu whakaaro
I enjoyed; 1. Your drawn pictures, awesome 2. Your sentence about Harry and washing in a bath, you justified your reason
Ko tēnei te mea māhau hei tiro anō; 1. Te tuhinga kei te wāhanga waenganui, tāpirihia he ira piko ki waenga i te 'really, really' hei whakawehe i ērā mea e rua
Things to look again at; 1. Your written piece for the middle section, add a comma, put it in between 'really, really' to separate the two items
Noho ora, noho haumaru tonu kautau ko tō whānau, You and your whānau stay well & safe
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Tēnā koe Dayna,
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nunui ki a koe.
Greetings to you.
Tēnā koe mō āu mahi pānui i whakairi ki tāu rangitaki.
Thank you for sharing your mahi pānui on your blog.
Ko ēnei ngā mea e rata ana ki awau;
1. Āu pikitia, tau kē
2. Tō rerenga e pā ana ki a 'Harry' me te horoi ki rō kauranga, i parahau koe i tāu whakaaro
I enjoyed;
1. Your drawn pictures, awesome
2. Your sentence about Harry and washing in a bath, you justified your reason
Ko tēnei te mea māhau hei tiro anō;
1. Te tuhinga kei te wāhanga waenganui, tāpirihia he ira piko ki waenga i te 'really, really' hei whakawehe i ērā mea e rua
Things to look again at;
1. Your written piece for the middle section, add a comma, put it in between 'really, really' to separate the two items
Noho ora, noho haumaru tonu kautau ko tō whānau,
You and your whānau stay well & safe