Here is my picture and what I had to do-Link.
Here are some puns I thought of.
Name-Benny, Eats beans a lot
That's all.
The problem was that dogs hated cats so most of the dogs hated Romeow and didn't want him near Drooliet.
Yes, the problem is solved because at the end everyone cheers for the both of them and I think they are all friends now! :)
That's it!
Tēnā koe e Dayna,
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi ki a koe
Greetings to you
Tēnā rawa atu koe, māhau e whakaatu ana i tāu waiaro whakapau kaha ki te whakamahi i ngā mahi i te kāenga
Thank you very much, you've shown a 'Give it your all' attitude to do mahi at home
Ngā āhuatanga e rata ana ki awau;
1. Tāu pūkenga toi, kei whea mai
2. I whakaaro koe me te ngana koe ki te tāutu i te kupu angarua
3. I whakamahi koe i ētahi kārawarawa, mīharo te kite, kia kaha rā
Aspects I enjoyed;
1. Your artistic talent, amazing
2. You're thinking about and having a go at identifying puns
3. You're using punctuation, fantastic, continue with this
Ngā āhuatanga māhau hei tiro anō;
1. Mō te taha pānui, tāpirihia he ira piko ki muri i te 'cats, me te 'so,', kia miramira te pūtake o tāu rerenga
Aspects for you to look again at;
1. For Reading purposes, add a comma after 'cats,' and 'so,', to emphasise the message in your sentence.
Noho ora, haumaru hoki ki a kautau ko tō whānau,
Stay well & safe to you & your whānau
Kia ora Dayna,
ReplyDeleteI like the way your humour comes through with the pun on Benny's name.
I agree with Kōkā Audrey, your art work is fantastic.
I expect there will be another chapter as cats and dogs often go back to fighting even if they are friends.
Mrs Krausse